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Slipstream
Book One Of A Crisis Of Two Worlds
Our Price: 5.99 USD

ISBN-10: 1-55404-949-0
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Genre: Science Fiction/Fantasy/SF
eBook Length: 324 Pages
Published: April 2012

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From inside the flap

ďLast night I died for the third time this week...Ē

Jordan Pendragon is crazy good at fixing situations that have gone bad. Itís a talent prized by his high school ice hockey team. However, when a car accident puts Jordan in the hospital, he wakes up with more than just an amazing slapshot in his toolbox. Jordan can manipulate space-time and in just a few weeks, heíll depend on it to save his life.

Reviews and Awards

5.0 out of 5 stars Incredible Debut Novel, April 5, 2012
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This review is from: Slipstream (Kindle Edition)
Slipstream focuses on brother and sister Jordan and Kathy Pendragon who live in Salt Lake City. After a car accident, Jordan, a star hockey player on his high school team, starts to exhibit a strange power-it appears as though he can manipulate time and he sees things that look like they're from this world, except their not. He's also being followed by a young British guy. Turns out the British guy, Kolin, is from an alternate Earth (called Avalon), a place that was devastated in 1945 when the first atomic bomb was detonated on Earth. Avalon was saved from complete devastation by an artificial intelligence, which rebuilt civilization giving what remained of the population a safe place to live. Jordan and his sister, along with Kolin, end up on Avalon where Jordan finds out its his destiny to fix the AI's insanity and that he's got more work to do to ensure the continued existence of the sister worlds.

Michael Offutt builds both of his worlds with rich detail. Of course, we know what present day Earth is like, but Avalon is a strange, vicious and overpopulated and he gives us all of the amazing, and sometimes horrific, insight. I envisioned something between "Blade Runner," "The Running Man" and "The Matrix" with a little bit of "Tron." The characters, however, are the core of what makes this book work. Jordan is a typical teenager in some moments and at others supersmart guy spouting off physics (I'm happy I watch the "The Big Bang Theory" because I could reference that I'd heard some of it before). He's also a good hockey player and, of course, what's not to like about a hockey player in a book, especially when the hockey he ends up playing is of the ultra-violent and possibly deadly variety. Kathy is also quite something. Initially she came off as the ditzy, but caring, sister. She quickly evolved in the parallel world to quite the badass. Kolin is another great character as he goes from protector of these two to falling head over heels in love. You can't help but to root for these people.

What makes this book a tremendous read is not knowing where it's going. There are twists from start to finish and, thankfully, they all make sense inside the story. With all the plot threads he introduces, Offutt manages to not lose track of anything. I'll admit, I don't like all the choices the characters made, but to show flawed people the characters do need to make mistakes so.

There is a line at the end of the book that I found quite profound, and oh so true in the world we live in today: "It's difficult to distinguish the voice of the Creator from the falsehoods told by man." Sci-fi often casts a light on the issues facing the world and this is a great example.

"Slipstream" is the first part of the "A Crisis of Two Worlds" series. I'm looking forward to reading part two because I need to know what becomes of Jordan, Kathy, Kolin and the others working to solve the crisis.
5.0 out of 5 stars A UNIQUE NEW WORLD, April 5, 2012
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Donna Hole (Orland, CA USA) - See all my reviews
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This review is from: Slipstream (Kindle Edition)
Slipstream was a brilliantly written, YA sci-fi novel. Once I started reading, it was hard to put down. The main character Jordan Pendragon is a little difficult to appreciate at first; he is extremely intelligent and a superior athlete, with a self centered attitude and emotionless demeanor that can be a bit off-putting, despite the tragedy of the story beginning. As the story progresses, however, so does Jordan's emotional growth. I attribute the early lack as the author allowing his character growth potential; and that is well done because there is distinct growth.

I have to admit I was more drawn to the alternate world of Avalon and the overall story plot than I was to the characters. The characters were excellenty portrayed; but the world and its unique technologies and concepts carried the story. Surgically implanted electronic and mechanical devices replaced the mystical natures of the vampire and succubi and aguments the currency and addiction aspects of the story with the ingenius discovery of Life Green; and an artificial intellegience (AI) stands in place of an all knowing God.

Each new concept introduced was fully explained by the intervention of science; and yes, it all made perfect sense. The author's ability to describe his settings and gadgetry in minute detail made the word vivid, imaginative, and quite real.

The overall story plot progresses through a complex structure of introducing the characters, the importance of their roles in resolving the crisis the AI's split personality (a literal split in two), explaining ramifications to both worldS (Earth and Avalon) if the AI is not ultimately cured of its insanity, and the development of trust relationships between all the chosen hero's. I was impressed with the story's level of intrigue.

I would have liked the story to focus more on Jordan's use of the slipstream to resolve the overall story plot, but as this is the first book in a series, I understand the focus on world building. And of course there is romance; what hero would be complete without a love interest to make saving two worlds more than just a task to be completed. The middle of the story has a slow down where the relationship issues between Jordan and the sexy bad boy Kolin navigate their way through tumultous issues of age, celebrity, and for Jordan, first love; but it picks up again once the romance plot is resolved. Jordan's twin, Kathy, also finds her heart captured by the combat veteran Dylan, and his puma familiar.

Overall, this was an exceptional integration of science, social issues, romance, theology, and enough action to intrIgUe any James Bond/Dr Who enthusiast. While I had grivances with some of the author's stylistic choices (pov and consistent use of pronouns), I highly recommend this novel with a five star rating for creativity, and I look forward to the next installment: Oculus.


Slipstream (Excerpt)


Chapter One

Collision

"Last night, I died for the third time this week," the 17-year-old boy said. "Iím in a place that looks like Madison Square Garden, only it isnít. Iím playing in a championship ice hockey game, and the whole arena is sold-out. I score with a perfectly executed slapper in the last seconds of the third period, and my team wins. Then I hear an immense thunderclap. Glass shatters and people scream. My ears start ringing and everything slows way down. Itís like Iím an insect caught in amber staring out at the world through a lens. I see a bullet flying over the ice, Kat. Only how is that even possible? Then it explodes into my right arm, I slam into the ice, and my blood gushes over the rink."

"How do you know the bullet is intended for you?"

"I just do," he said. His eyes, normally a robinís egg blue, looked dark and haunted.

"These arenít premonitions," Kathy said, shaking her head. She glanced up from her smartphone in an attempt to seem less distracted. "If I had to guess... Iíd say itís something else just bubbling into your subconscious while youíre sleeping. Everyone has nightmares, Jordan."

He groaned as they waited on the empty sidewalk. Every time he tried telling her about his vivid dreams, Kathy blew him off. And they haunted him, growing worse with each passing night. Jordan didnít know what to do, so he spoke with her and hoped that eventually, she might listen or at least pretend that she cared.

"I get what youíre saying, but trust me. Itís not like this," he insisted. "It feels real, Kat. And the arena... I feel like I should know where it is, but Iíve looked for it with internet searches and found nothing. I can even tell you where thereís a dent the size of my fist on one of the Zambonis. But thatís only part of it. There are other sections of the same dream that I havenít told you about."

"Like what?" she asked, tapping on the screen.

"Sometimes, I see a basalt tower enclosed on all sides by an ocean of ice. Itís in a place where sunlight doesnít reach, but I have a feeling that it wasnít always like that. The tower is primordial, and it looks alien. However, before I can explore, the dream shifts. I find myself in an executive office, but the person that uses it has done a lot of terrible things. There are unspeakable objects kept in glass specimen jars within a secret alcove. And Iím not alone. Thereís someone else with me-a girl. She has long brown hair and is very sad. Sheís also naked save for a striped dinner jacket, and I know without a doubt that itís mine only I donít even own a fucking suit. As if that werenít strange enough, I think I know her name only I canít recall it for the life of me. I look to the door. I hear growls coming from behind it. She urges me to flee. But I have nowhere to run except to leap from out a shattered window a half-mile above the city. As Iím falling, thatís when I wake up... "

"Screaming," she finished for him. "I heard you last night, but itís not real. Shit Jordan, you need a fucking shrink, I swear."

Jordan frowned, and she knew that sheíd crossed the line and hurt his feelings. At that moment, she admitted to herself that he sounded desperate, that this might be a cry for help.

"I think I know why youíre having these dreams," she said, "but, you need to let it go. They arenít coming back."

"Whatíre you talking about?" The tone of his voice lay somewhere south of resignation.

"Iím talking about mom and dad. Itís not your fault that theyíre gone. Stop tormenting yourself, and maybe youíll be able to sleep again. Itís that simple."

He attached the earbuds to his smartphone. "I wish for once that you could just listen to what Iím saying. This has nothing to do with that."

"Iím sorry," she said, but he ignored her. She sighed. "Youíre acting childish." He still didnít look at her. "Okay... so you expect me to believe that youíre somehow seeing something thatís going to happen in the future?" Kathy threw up her hands in frustration and almost tossed her phone. "Out of the two of us, youíve always been the one with his feet firmly planted on the ground. What does all that science and math mean if you donít use it? And for the record, tell me why I should believe something as crazy as this? And even if I did believe you, what the hell am I supposed to do about it?" Jordan just stared straight forward with his hands in his pockets. After a long, awkward silence, she decided it best to let him sulk, and she resumed her game of Angry Birds.

"I do miss mom and dad," he said after some time. "I guess Iím jealous of everyone at school that has real parents. Do I sometimes feel incomplete? Yeah, almost like a half person. What I donít get is how you seem to be all right with it."

Kathy frowned. "The difference between me and you is I hide it better. We were abandoned, Jordy. Thatís the only story I know. So until someone says anything different, Iím sticking to that story without remorse."

He remained silent for a moment, chewing on her words. "Do you think I look anything like dad?"

"Why does it matter?" But she knew that it just did.

She regarded him with a skeptical eye-hooded pullover complete with kangaroo pocket, skater jeans; blond hair gelled into a spike and tried to imagine her father wearing the same thing. Kathy didnít know why, but she had always pictured her father as the kind of man that played a concert piano and listened to Chopin more than Owl City. "Ummm, no," she replied after some time.

"Thanks, for nothing." He scowled but his attempt at "mad" fell flat.

"Youíre welcome." She detected a hint of a smile at the corner of his mouth. "By the way, are you working this weekend?" The schedule on the wall of the managerís office flashed in Jordanís mind. "You didnít write it down, did you?" she asked.

He glared at her like he always did when she pointed out his shortcomings. "Of course I did. I just donít have it on me right now. I think Iím expected on Saturday night." Jordan and others from his high school swim team dove from indoor cliffs as part of a water show at the Mayan Adventure restaurant. Handsome didnít even begin to describe him at almost six-feet tall, thin, and covered in flawless, cream-colored skin common in those of Scandinavian lineage. The lone exception lay on the sole of his left foot-a birthmark in the shape of a monarch butterfly. It embarrassed Jordan, and he took precautions to hide it even from his sister. In fact, to his knowledge, sheíd never seen it. He went so far as to view it as a deformity. However, despite this flaw Jordan remained a popular choice for jobs that required a Speedo and little else.

"Youíre going to have to quit when ice hockey season is in full swing," she said, "Thereís no way you can do both. Not that youíd want to."

"Yeah-it sucks too because I need the money."

High school, hockey, and a part-time job made for a precarious balancing act. Sometimes, Jordan felt angry that he had to work. He knew kids his age that didnít have jobs. They stayed at home and played video games. It made him resentful. He could understand why kids quit school, sold drugs, or did tricks for married men who indulged their homosexuality through hook-ups on Craigís Lists. They made enough in a couple hours work to pay for an entire week of expenses. One time outside a 7-Eleven, a guy offered him two-hundred dollars to consent to a few photos back at his place. That money sounded awfully good right now.

A chirp from a bird perched in a tree with yellow leaves brought Jordanís mind back into focus. But it also reminded him that the last days of summer had arrived. "Only one week until fall, Kat," he said. The morose tone in his voice reflected an inner need to shift topics in a different direction.

"Why do you hate this time of year so much? I personally love it," she said. "Everything is cool, you donít have to run the air conditioner constantly, and your clothes arenít all sticky with sweat."

"Well, most things die in the winter, you know." She didnít respond to his statement, and Jordan stared at the street in silence for almost half a minute. "But aside from that, I hate saying goodbye to summer," he finished.

"Itís only for a couple of weeks, and your first game is coming up soon, so Iíd try to snap out of it. Once that starts, youíll be off having fun with the other jocks. For the record, I hate most of your teammates, and the sluts they date." She glanced up from her iPhone and said, "Somethingís on your mind. Why donít you just spit it out?"

"Nothingís on my mind," Jordan scoffed.

"Whatever. Youíve been brooding on something for the last hour. When your eyes become frosty, I always suspect youíre up to something."

"Iím not up to anything," Jordan snapped.

"Liar."

"As if you could tell when Iím lying," he said. But in the off chance that she could, Jordan feigned a sudden interest in the traffic. Jordan wished she didnít read so many psychology books. Earlier that day, Robbie Hart, his only real friend since middle school, had asked him if he wanted to get high. Rob had gotten his hands on some crystal and wanted to try it out. Jordan had told him no, but there had been little soul in the rejection. In truth, Rob wouldnít have to push very hard for him to say yes, but he wasnít about to let Kathy in on this. Heíd hear no end to the nagging that would come from a confession like that.

How can she see that in my eyes though? he wondered.

A cool breeze that held just a kiss of winter blew down off the mountain. It ruffled his blond hair. Jordan turned his gaze slightly upward and narrowed his eyes to shield them from the bright sunlight. He saw bursts of color everywhere. In the east, he saw angry purple storm clouds gathering at the base of the Wasatch Mountains. In the west, yellow sunlight clear and unhindered fell over a valley choking with urban sprawl.

Behind him, the afternoon bell sounded off followed by the gentle roar of hundreds of teenage feet. The distant clang of locker doors as they slammed shut filled the air. A traffic jam soon formed in the parking lot. It spilled out onto the street in front of East High School as students boarded buses or drove off in cars comprised of the most affordable "out-of-warranty" automobiles belonging to the prestigious German Car Club-Volkswagen, Audi, and BMW. Privilege, had its hallmark.

Adjacent to him, Kathy texted Dustin, the boy sheíd been seeing for almost a week. She was a natural in using a small digital keyboard and could probably type the Declaration of Independence in a text message faster than Jordan could lace up a hockey skate. Jordan admonished her with a shake of his head and pressed the orange iPod application at the bottom of the screen. He loved Eminem, and the rapperís latest album began just as their ride pulled up to the curb in a sporty black BMW X5.

Kathy walked to the driverís side and hopped into the backseat. Jordan peeked in through the passenger window and noticed Wayneís yoga mat rolled up on the front seat and decided to hop into the back as well. Despite being several years old, the interior of the BMW still had that pristine smell. Each seat had been upholstered in black leather and complemented by a highly polished tortoise shell dashboard. Wayne looked sharply dressed in an Armani Exchange t-shirt, gray utility shorts, and sandals. Michael Buble played on the satellite radio.

"How was school?" Wayne asked. Jordan watched him angle his head to the left to check for an opening in the traffic. He had broad shoulders and a slim build, the kind that tapered to a narrow waist that wore designer clothes rather well. He had brown, thinning hair.

"Iím just glad that itís finally Friday," Jordan said. "Iím a little tired."

"Youíve been getting up early every morning to go in for practice at the rink. If youíre tired, go to bed a little earlier and cut back on your practice days."

"Thatís not why Iím tired," he said, then realized too late that heíd just opened a can of worms.

"Why, then?"

Should I tell Wayne about the nightmares? He thought about this for a moment and decided to stay silent. Instead, he moved the conversation in a different direction. "Thereís just this big game coming up the first week of October in Park City. Itíd be nice if we win; if we take State again this year, itíll be something I can add to my college application." Jordan possessed natural athletic ability in buckets and probably could give up a few precious hours on the rink in exchange for more sleep. The thought seemed doable on paper, but Jordan knew he would never follow through with it. He loved playing ice hockey and wanted to start for a college that had a respected athletics program. This would never happen if he snoozed until 7 a.m.

Wayne stepped on the gas and merged into the traffic with the skill of someone that has done it for years. It always amazed Jordan that Wayne seemed to be able to get around so well in the flow of rush hour traffic. In driverís education, heíd been nervous while driving on the interstate and oftentimes ended up getting into the right lane several miles ahead of his exit to avoid having to merge. Wayne didnít do that. He drove in the left lane for miles and then flipped his blinkers on and forced his way into the right lane just before he needed the ramp. "Have you thought of where youíre going to college?" Wayne asked him, putting his signal on to change lanes.

"Not really," Jordan replied. Between him and his sister, they had numerous options as both had been National Merit Finalists. Being an athlete rounded the package while his sister did a lot of extra-curricular clubs. "Iíd like to go to Cornell."

Kathy looked up from her smartphone with enough exuberance that her blond hair flicked over the ear as if she were in a shampoo commercial. Jordan immediately sensed a subject change. "Dustin wants me go over to his house tonight and watch a movie with him," she said.

"Are you going?" Wayne asked.

"I havenít decided yet." She tried to hold back her excitement and stifle it into an androgynous monotone.

"Youíre going," Jordan said. "Stop lying, youíre not any good at it."

"And you are?"

"Yes."

Kathy looked crosswise at him, then, half playfully, half mad, punched his arm when he scowled at her. Then his expression changed and it frightened her. Jordan seemed transfixed with the flow of traffic just outside the window. "Whatís wrong?" It was the last thing she said as she plunged into the longest twenty seconds of her life.

Neurologists have studied the remarkable layering of memories that the brain does during times of stress. This is why some people claim that your whole life flashes before your eyes at the moment of death. The phenomenon is also responsible for the alteration in the perception of time flow. With each passing second, the brain encodes dense layers of information, tracking the movement of a personís environment at the moment oneís life is threatened. This was one of those instants. Time slowed to a crawl and horror erupted all around them.

An intense bright gleam from the polished grill of a semi blinded Jordan. Then his ears rang from the awful caterwaul of twisting metal. Shrapnel exploded into the entire cabin of the vehicle. He heard his sister scream and the piercing shatter of glass. The world turned upside down. Somewhere in all the chaos he heard a resounding boom as the airbags deployed and his body hit something hard and unforgiving. Pain shot through him as debris from the car struck his head. His vision turned black. He wanted to cry out, but he felt himself pulled into a suffocating darkness.